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August 14, 2003 03:17 pm ET - research by Lineage - US
Player Story Winner
The latest winner of the Player Story Submissions has been chosen – CobraCmmndr’s submission of “The Death Below”. Well done, CobraCmmndr!

You can read CobraCmmndr’s winning submission here.

Thank you to everyone who has submitted a player story! If you have submitted a story in the past, it will be automatically included in the entries when we select our next player story.

August 14, 2003 03:32 pm ET (#1)
LC Reporter

93 posts

Different kind of story... good way to go though, if this was hardcore ^^

August 14, 2003 03:46 pm ET (#2)
Loyal Fan

722 posts

pretty goo story i like how it ends alot ^.^

August 14, 2003 04:41 pm ET (#3)
Loyal Fan

34 posts

good job too

August 14, 2003 04:47 pm ET (#4)
Loyal Fan

3 posts

yaaaaaas.... IMPALE COBRA!!!
er sompin like that......

August 14, 2003 04:53 pm ET (#5)
Loyal Fan

23 posts

Very good story Cobra, you beat me... ;-)
I would rate my own story 6 out of 10 (not Coming of Magic, that one is 8 out of 10) and your story gets a rating of 8 out of 10.



August 14, 2003 05:53 pm ET (#6)
Loyal Fan

444 posts

it looks like you try too hard with your thesaurus...
great story tho ^_^

would it have been too much to type out Death Knight instead of Dk... o.o;;;

August 15, 2003 03:07 am ET (#7)
Loyal Fan

2 posts

*sigh* so, i don't get it, did he beat the DK or what? im confused o.O. I'm gonna write a story not about killing a boss or any of that, theres way too many of those stories. Now to figure out where i post them... o.O

August 15, 2003 04:00 am ET (#8)
Loyal Fan

53 posts

very nice story i enjoyed it

August 15, 2003 08:22 am ET (#9)
Loyal Fan

30 posts

O.O wow good job!!!

August 15, 2003 08:22 am ET (#10)
Loyal Fan

30 posts

O.O wow good job!!!

August 15, 2003 09:47 am ET (#11)
Loyal Fan

7 posts

very nice Cobra, awesome reading !!! when is part 2, the funeral hehe

August 15, 2003 06:26 pm ET (#12)
Loyal Fan

17 posts

Too much thesaurus? I speak like that normally... guess my education was better than some. ^^

Seriously, I got so sick of reading these happy moment stories where everyone cheers and wins in the end... I like stories where the hero gets OWNED.

I threw it together in a about 20 mins... figured it was interesting enough to submit. Glad people liked it. ^^

Hail Me.

August 15, 2003 09:14 pm ET (#13)
Loyal Fan

15 posts

Yo cobra first of ][ail me o.o
"Too much thesaurus? I speak like that normally... guess my education was better than some. ^^"
And second its I guess my education is better then som o.o not "guess my education was better than some. ^^"
}{ail me o.o

August 15, 2003 09:49 pm ET (#14)
Loyal Fan

17 posts

Actually, since I had already said "I" prior... it's fine to say guess on its own.

Thanks for coming out though.

August 15, 2003 11:27 pm ET (#15)
Loyal Fan

30 posts

Hey Cobra, nice to see someone I know become so famous!

There were a few paragraphs that were a little strong on the use of adjectives and adverbs (sometimes a writer can overdue it in my opinion) but I found that overall this was a great story.

Ending was a bit sketchy dude. I had to read it twice to get the just of what happened. Kinda had that "hmmmm now how will I end this... blah blah blah done!" feeling. I think the ending could have used a bit more description but again that's only my opinion.

Oh and I still haven't gotten any other DVDs in. Going to Calgary for a week so when I get back I'll inquire about them AGAIN. I know they're on backorder but I've had you waiting like a month now. Maybe more. That's what you get for ordering the obscure titles :)

Oh yeah... Good job... wish I could write like that :)
Take care!

August 16, 2003 12:01 pm ET (#16)
Loyal Fan

17 posts

Ya, sucks that they limited the stories to 1000 words... had to cut things short so that NC wouldn't get all whiny. ^^

Oh well... writing was never my strong point... world domination is.

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